What is Evening Harmony about?
Evening falls. The flowers give off their scent, a violin plays in the distance, the sky reddens and then goes out. Nothing else happens: no character, no action, just a moment of the day dissolving.
But the vocabulary is that of the church, and it takes over everything: censer, altar, monstrance. Baudelaire turns the sunset into a mass, and the last line reveals who it is for: a memory, kept like a host. The religious poem was a love poem, one that tradition places among those addressed to Apollonie Sabatier.
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rhymes for sixteen lines
in -ige and in -oir
Why do the lines come back? Because Baudelaire borrows the principle of the pantoum, a form of Malay origin that the French Romantics adopted: the second and fourth lines of each stanza become the first and third of the next. He takes liberties with it, which is why it is often called a false pantoum. The effect is physical: by dint of returning, the lines stop being read and become pure sound, like the waltz and the violin the poem speaks of. The poem does not only describe a dizziness, it produces one. Debussy, fittingly, set it to music.